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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:03 pm | |
| Name: Harmony Gyaku Age: Twenty-three Rank: Head ANBU Village: Leaf Affinity: Water Type: Ninjutsu, and some Taijustu. Specialized: She specilaizes in escape routes, and hand to hand combat. Clan: None Physical description: Height: 5"7 Weight: 120 pounds Eye colour: Violet Hair colour: Black Personality: Harmony can be a silent person a lot of the time, yet she also proves to be gentle a lot. She takes action against all threats making sure that they are dealt with accordingly. She has a strong sense of judgement but will only due what she's told to do. Harmony is very quiet and regards people with a smile all the time, everything is good if you look toward the bright side. Likes: Harmony likes animals, and art. Hates: She dislikes the infirmary, and needles! D: Background: Harmony grew up in the leaf village. She was small when she first met the head ANBU, and then she became inspired. Her mother died from an illness when she was fifteen leaving her home alone. When she was alone she trained more and more, but always showed a smile. After all crying was something she wasn't used to.. She trained every day till finally she finished at the academy. When she was a genin she helped along the community, mainly helping the other students train. She trained more and more over the years exceling a lot. She ended up in the infirmary a lot, which is why she hates it but.. Eventually she joined the ANBU, she started going through those ranks slowly. And eventually she made her way to the top of ANBU, and became the head. Nin: 4 Tai: 3 Gen: 3 Intelligence: 4 Speed: 5 Power: 3 Chakra amount: 4 Chakra control: 3 Seal speed: 3 Seal knowledge: 3 Weapon: Hayato (Falcon.) Type: Sword Classification: Saber Description: The sword looks like it's made of steel or some sort of reinforcement like that. The blade is a pale silver, which seems to glitter in the sun's rays. The handle is engraved with a falcon on it. The falcon looks like it was carved out of the metal its self. The blade is very light yet fast. Ability: The sword can make a dense ice around it. The ice is able to reflect a ninjutsu attack but it can't defend against Taijutsu or Genjutsu. It's rather weak ice to start with basically it's a normal sword. When it reflects at ninjutsu it can only run up to ten posts long before it wears off, it only reflect minor ninjutsu's at b level. The ice is durable to most attacks except for fire. It's easily enough ruined by a strong fire attack. For fire it only takes up to seven posts at the most before the effect wears off. When this happens she has to wait another fifteen posts before being able to use it again.
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:14 pm | |
| Oh, you want to be Head Anbu, coool... First off, you need an age, unless it's unknown. If it's unknown for some reason, just put unknown, por favor. Next, your background is a little vague. It doesn't have to be huge or whatever, but just explain a little about her life, maybe her family, how she came to be an anbu, etc. Laslty, you should probably have a limit on what level you can reflect. On how many it can reflect. For example, after reflecting three B rank jutsus, the ice breaks and you need a recharge time to get the ice back. See what I'm saying? Need to see how durable it is. | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:20 pm | |
| I forgot age? >____>;; Opps. I thought I had one there. That's silly of me.
Yeah I was trying to figure out what to do with the blade. Thanks for the suggestion. ^_^
I'm looking at how to expand I think I'll use what you said. =D | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:48 pm | |
| Looks way better. Though one more tiny bit. There is a gap between your leaving the academy (becoming genin) to becoming an anbu. I think it would be best to put a little filler information in there because going from genin to Head anbu in the history just doesn't look right. (And I'm not saying you literally went from a genin to Head Anbu, I'm just saying you need to write what happened inbetween) | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:50 pm | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:57 pm | |
| Please don't kill me, but I'm being difficult right now. Sorry. It still has it as what she did as a genin. Add in some chunin parts, maybe jounin and a little of anbu. Or, you can just say "she trained year after year, gaining ranks and getting stronger. Soon, after being an anbu for some years, the Head Anbu position opened and she gladly accepted..." | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:01 am | |
| T_T ... *stares at and bursts out laughing.* Yeah! Okay more detail to the history kay. XD I got it. ^_^ | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:02 am | |
| Thank you, and I'm sorry for being difficult. | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:03 am | |
| Is that better? | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:08 am | |
| It's awesome. Approved!!! | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:11 am | |
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Rio Founder
Posts : 646 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 30 Location : Watching the clouds
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:12 am | |
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Zetsumei The Most Powerful Lawn-Dart Ever Synthesized by The League of European Zebras
Posts : 422 Join date : 2008-09-02 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:27 am | |
| >_> This is kinda weird... I have to approve stuff now, don't I? Anyway, great character! I approve! | |
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Rio Founder
Posts : 646 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 30 Location : Watching the clouds
| Subject: Re: Harmony Gyaku Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:29 am | |
| - Puppet_Master wrote:
- >_> This is kinda weird... I have to approve stuff now, don't I?
Anyway, great character! I approve! You'll get used to it. | |
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