OOC Chapter 3

I'd like it split. Because when I came back i was like. Is this all dealing with Zero's coming to the leaf village? O.O? But it doesn't matter.

And so I started reading alot of it till I finally realized it had nothing important for me to read. Though I was surprised how fast you two got there. And how fast it got in a news scroll or whatever. Seeing as he just attacked eight minutes ago.



Alright. A quote I go put!

Let's say he's been fight for awhile and that's it's been snowing like a day now

>.> He's only on his first fight.

Plus not even and ANBU level, nor a Sannin level could be fighting an entire village all day.

NinjaTez wrote:

Don't do it, Ryoh. >_>

And a quote would be nice, Kyo.

Don't do what? I just want a coherent, easy to follow story. I just want to know if it's possible to split the topic to separate Ebarai joining and Zero attacking.

Kyoshiro wrote:

>.> He's only on his first fight.

Plus not even and ANBU level, nor a Sannin level could be fighting an entire village all day.

We could say it snowed a bit the day before or something. Jeez people ever heard of tweaking things for a story.

I know one thing. The entire Snow Day? topic is completly disorganized. It's only eight minutes in for my charry. And around thirty minutes in probably for the others.

Dude. It's summer. There's no way its gunna snow without a weather jutsu.

Kyoshiro wrote:

Dude. It's summer. There's no way its gunna snow without a weather jutsu.

That's the point. Here is what I think the timeline should be:

1. Zero made it snow for a few minutes the day before and the phenomenon made it into the newspaper

2. Ryoh and Hikato read about this strange occurrence in the newspaper, Ryoh recognizes who did it and sets out to recruit him

3. Ryoh and Hikato make it to Konoha first before Zero gets back or whatever and the whole Ebarai thing happens.

4. Zero makes it snow again and causes a ruckus as the gates.

Nothing a bit of editing of the first couple of posts won't fix to make sure there aren't any plotholes.

We wouldn't have to have done any of that if you would have waited for a decent time to show. Or if you would have done it in another thread then gone to my thread the next day of snowing. Or stuff like that.

>.<

Whatever. I'm just gunna continue from where it is. I hate having to do things over.

Fuck it I'm stopping the arc. How can I do this if you guys are going to be so difficult?

<_< I thought you meant split everything Yuukin related out. Because you did say something about Yuukin. But, yeah you can split out all of Zero's parts, and Ryoh and Hikato would have to change the name of the topic.

Ryoh wrote:

Fuck it I'm stopping the arc. How can I do this if you guys are going to be so difficult?

Just meet with Zero after he causes some trouble. That's all. Edit out the parts were you saw him at the gate and it should be fine.

Dude. Chillax. No need for cussing and stopping the arc.

NinjaTez wrote:

<_< I thought you meant split everything Yuukin related out. Because you did say something about Yuukin. But, yeah you can split out all of Zero's parts, and Ryoh and Hikato would have to change the name of the topic.

Yeah I'd like to split and delete some of the Yuukin parts. They ruin the point.

NinjaTez wrote:

Just meet with Zero after he causes some trouble. That's all. Edit out the parts were you saw him at the gate and it should be fine.

Fine, but he's going to have to edit the first post regarding how he made it snow the day before. How do you split topics, Tez?

Kyoshiro wrote:

Dude. Chillax. No need for cussing and stopping the arc.

WTF do you expect? How would you feel if you put together a loose story for us to act out and I did my own thing and made unnecessary plotholes just because "I hate redoing things."

Lol, Ryen, just keep Yuukin. He's not hurting your story really. Yeah, he's a little silly, but he did give you your food and didn't mess anything up.

And I'll split the topics.

Ryoh, would it be alright to change the title to "The Day After the Snow Fell." Maybe so it can be a day after and everybody would know and it would be more logical.

Sure

Also, I was thinking, since this is the first time we have done it this way instead of one big story... we can put Act 1 (then 2, 3), or Part 1 (Part 2, etc) after each topic so people know which ones to read first. So, The Fateful Encounter would be Act 1.

Do what you want to make it more organized, Tez. I'm sure your OCD would know how to make things organized and appealing that I do.

Back. ^_^ And I changed my first post a bit, saying he attacked the next day.

What Kyosh just said in the snowy day topic is true. Don't just kill them like that, Ryoh. Make it at least a little epic.

ryoh, you can't auto hit. even if they are npcs

Since I was so close, I was expecting him to kill the anbu. It's alright this time. He's knows not to auto-hit PCs. Just don't do it to often to NPCs.

We'll have the fight in "silencing the sound", Ryoh.

Yeah, sure, whatever. The new guy gets a biju, though? WTF, man?

Where should Kyo post for his fight with the Anbu?