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PostSubject: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:26 pm

Name: Konzen Yamiha

Age: 18

Rank: Anbu squad leader

Village: The Village hidden in the mist

Affinity: Water/ Wind ninjutsu.

Type: Well balanced with an affinity for taijutsu and has the Tentouyama kekkei genkai (undiscovered). He is a master of stealth and speed.

Specialized: Specialises in water / Wind ninjutsu much like his apparent father Mako Yamiha, swordplay, taijutsu and genjutsu of his own creation.

Clan: Yamiha clan, his mother was from the tentoyama clan.

Physical description: Konzen stands at a decent five feet nine inches, with a lean, muscular build. He has short brown hair which sits messily over his ninja headband, which is longer than usual as he inherited a scarf from his father and a ninja headband from the village hidden in the mist, and used them both to make his own ninja headband. His light, almost icy blue eyes sit in his face like two gems, glaring out their sockets, and his chiselled bone structure defines his face. He has three scars on each cheek from an attack by a wolf when he was just a little child, and the wolfs master massacred his clan and his blood parents, sparing the child for the cruelty. He wears a typically black ninja outfit, black shirt, black trousers, black lightweight boots with light metal coverings, black fingerless gloves with silver wrist guards. Inside the folds of his shirt are several kunai and across his belt are even more shiruken. Over all this, he wears a long, black, hooded cloak. On his belt resides his two most important possessions, his ocarina and his flute.
If he chooses to carry his weapons with him, he uses genjutsu to conceal them as the ocarina and flute. The flute breaks in half and when the jutsu is dispelled each half transforms into one of these:
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That click together at the hilt to form on long, double edged sword.
His ocarina, once dispelled, transforms into a dagger with a long, curved blade that is serrated on the inner edge. The hilt of the dagger is a white metal that has holes in it, and one thin, whistle like piece of ivory at the bottom of the black grip. The blade itself is inscribed with various tribal images.

Personality: Konzen devotes himself to any task, especially to his training. Hence his amazing physical condition and his great skill with tai and ninjutsu. He has a reasonable sense of humour, but he prizes his honor above all. If someone defeats him in battle, he must devote himself to the task of besting that opponent. He can usually be found either training or practicing his ocarina or flute when he should be doing paperwork. Despite being an ANBU squad leader of the village hidden in the mist, he does not carry their stereotypical serious nature. He is quite light hearted and joking, sometimes childish and can be quite arrogant too. He does have a serious side, but it’s not a pretty site and he has tried his best to model himself after Mako.

Likes: what he/she likes: Mako, his comrades, his squad, fighting, artistry and fun and most of all, women ninja.

Hates: what he/she dislikes: Cocky ninja, opponents that rely heavily on one type of jutsu, “tricky” jutsu and excessive alcohol.

Background: Konzen has grown up in the Mist village from a very young age. He was born from Mako’s brother and his wife who was a high member of the Tentoyama clan, however she ran away to be with Mako’s brother. When Konzen was four years old, some mysterious ninja came to take him and his mother for their kekkei genkai genes, but both the mother and father were murdered in saving Konzen’s life. Mako arrived to find his brother and his sister-in-law near death, and a traumatised four year old Konzen clutching onto his dying mother’s body.

Wrapping him up in his fathers black cloak, and bundling up the weapons of both Konzen’s parents Mako promised the dying family to raise Konzen as his own and keep this event a secret from him, as if it ever got out that a Tentouyama survived then Konzen would be hounded for his blood inheritance.

Since that day, Konzen has lived and grown with Mako and is now an ANBU squad leader at the age of 18, propelled to work hard to master the weapons he has had since as long as he can remember. He dreams often of strange places and people, and his weapons symbolise something he is yet to discover.

Weapon: Name: “Kyuuten OniKonjou” (Nine point demon soul)
Type: Two scimitars that can become a double sword (see description above)
Classification: Unique
Description:
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– singly. The hilt is black with red ribbon and the blade a dark grey with a bright silver edge. The bottom of the hilt is not rounded as in the picture but square with a small bit of chain at the bottom.
Ability: As stated, the weapon can be concealed as a flute in two parts, and can break apart and be used as two separate swords, yet they can also link at the chains for increased flexibility. The swords have the inherent ability to attach themselves to one master, and if anyone but their master tries to use their power they are slowly drained of their chakra until they die. They keep their master in good health, healing small scratches and wounds and increasing speed and strength little by little as time goes on in a battle.

Weapon: Name: “Ryuushimasu” (dragon master)
Type: Long bladed dagger.
Classification: Unique
Description: A dagger with a long, curved blade that is serrated on the inner edge. The hilt of the dagger is a white metal that has holes in it, and one thin, whistle like piece of ivory at the bottom of the black grip. The blade itself is inscribed with various tribal images.
Ability: As stated, the weapon can be concealed as an ocarina. The dagger has the ability to “steal” one jutsu at a time and store it until Konzen decides to steal another one. It has four slots to fill, and with each one a series of notes, or a song, that has to be played to unleash it. Because of this, Konzen tends to steal large, tricky jutsu’s and keep them in his blade. They can be used by the blade in its ocaria form too.

Stats:
Nin: 5
Tai: 7
Gen: 3
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 5
Power: 5
Chakra amount: 5
Chakra control: 3
Seal speed: 3
Seal knowledge: 4


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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:32 pm

There's only one real problem with it. Konzen can't use Genjutsu at all since he has a 0 in it. Also, his ninjutsu won't be that useful either because his seal speed is really slow. The second is just a practicability flaw.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:34 pm

I added the +5 for a bijuu as rio said i could have one Smile

I'll post the bijuu bio asap
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:39 pm

WTF? You have a biju?
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:42 pm

If that's a problem I'll just re edit my character
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:45 pm

My question is are there any left? 5 or 6 are with one character, don't ask because it doesn't make much sense to me either. IIRC the others were already given away.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:46 pm

Two tail and five tail were left apparently.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:56 pm

Really because I could've sworn Rio's character had them both so I counted them with the others that were with one character.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:59 pm

Ryoh wrote:
Really because I could've sworn Rio's character had them both so I counted them with the others that were with one character.

Yeah I was gonna give one to him. He asked me before he decided to take it.

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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Wed Jul 29, 2009 6:04 pm

Could he at least make his character stronger? I mean it's not to reasonable or believeable for a chuunin with average stats to be a taijutsu prodigy.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Thu Jul 30, 2009 5:06 am

I've edited him to be the head anbu for Dark, he needs one. If there are any more problems then I can edit them too. I've left out the Bijuu and the clan until the matter is resolved.
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Thu Jul 30, 2009 3:46 pm

i don't see anything wrong with it, so go ahead with the clan part.

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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:38 pm

All I need now is for the clan(s) to be approved, and I'm done Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:55 am

Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:31 pm

approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:57 am

Anbu Squad leaders have a stat total of 45, not 50.

Otherwise it looks fine but I'm not an admin so I can't call the shots regarding your swords.

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PostSubject: Re: Konzen Miyamoto - Riketz   Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:11 am

There, fixed it =]
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