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PostSubject: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:25 pm

Name: Kazuma Harukotsu

Age: 34

Rank: Akatsuki

Village: Former Leaf

Affinity: Water

Type: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu.

Specialized: Kenjutsu/Brute force and multi-element combat.

Clan: N/A

Physical description: Kazuma is part of a race of physically improved humans with massive taijutsu capabilities and little to no genjutsu. He stands at seven feet tall, give or take a few inches, and has massive, bulging muscles. His hair is wild and black. Itís fairly messy and looks spiked but not straight up, almost in all directions. He has some stubble on his cheeks and chin, and usually has a cigarette lit in his mouth. He wears a large black cloak most of the time.

Personality: He is calm on most occasions, but can be very stubborn and agitating. He is a neutral party on most topics, but has strong beliefs on others and isnít afraid to boast or exert his opinion. He loses his cool attitude in fights and is quick to react. He is also impatient and impulsive.

Likes: He likes fighting, showing off his strength, and joking around a little too much. He has a semi-perverted attitude towards woman.

Hates: he doesnít like stuck-up or snobbish people, and people who go by the book too much. He also hates people who are completely consumed by justice or good, and the opposite, like people who are consumed by evil or darkness.

Background: Born into a small, unknown clan, the only exceptional traits being large physical strength and size. As he grew, he realized that his way of thinking wasnít accepted by society, and renounced his status as a ninja of the leaf.

Weapon:
Name: Shinku Shimekiri (Scarlet End)
Type: A very long, very sharp, thin katana.
Classification: An abnormally long blade, very long and extra thing with an extremely sharp edge.
Description: It has a black guard shaped like a shuriken. It also has a black hilt with a piece of black cloth attached to the end. The hilt is also slightly longer than usual. On the hilt of the blade there is an inscription and a blood seal that activates its ability.
Ability: The ability to fuse with Kazumaís blood and create a sludge called Blood Sludge. The sludge can harden to form a shield, weapon or anything needed. As a liquidi can be an acid that burns into muscle tissue, but cannot create a full hoel in the body unless it is repeatedly applied. The sludge can also absorb matter around it and create more of itself. As a solid it is highly flammable and as a liquid it can be electrified. the Blood Sludge, when touching the opponent, can leech chakra out of the opponent. The charka then travels back to Kazuma. The chakra leeching is slow and can overload easiyl if not transfered fast enough. The sludge can only absorb solid materials. High density materials such as diamond can take months to absorb small quantities of. Low density or loose particles such as dirt or grass are easy to absorb. Things like trees take a medium level to absorb, but are still not as hard as a metal or diamond.

Nin: 5
Tai: 5
Gen: 0
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 5
Power: 5
Chakra amount: 5
Chakra control: 3
Seal speed: 3
Seal knowledge: 1


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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:43 pm

Just something to add to the Blood Sludge- As a gas it can be blown away, as a liquid it can be electrified and as a solid it burns easily.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:44 pm

Those weapons are kinda broken
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:31 pm

take away the gas part and i think it's fine.

i'm confused about the gourd though. what does it do?

and his personality is contradicting...

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:32 pm

I think the gourd is a philosopher's stone type thing being able to convert things in the sense of a ninja like alchemy.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:09 pm

So no gaseous form for the Blood sludge? Ok.

The Gourd is basically what Heartstarter said, except it can only convert the special material inside the gourd.

So is that an approval, Dark?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:24 pm

hmmm...kinda concerned about the gourd thing, but ok. approved.

basicly, you abuse it, you lose it. got it?

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:43 pm

Got it. Thanks. ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:45 pm

Affinity can't be blood. Make it water. No poison without limits. Also, you really need to describe Gourd of the Ancients better. It's very vague. Also, can you make the edits Dark asked for.

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:57 pm

I took out the gas form, limited the poison, and tried to detail the gourd better. Good?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:12 pm

Oh, for the poison, give in post amount how long it lasts. Also, you said your chakra was fire based in the Background. >_> So, maybe you have to change your affinity again. And 'magical essence' for Gourd of Ancients?

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:57 pm

-facepalm- Changing affinity. Chakra is the magical essence.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:46 pm

k, well, i approved last time, but everyone else had problems with it, so i'm going to let those who had problems with your abilities judge for approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:57 pm

Umm... It's fine, I guess... Approved. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:40 pm

How much chakra does the goo take per post? How does it effect the user, and I have to point out there should be a limit to what he can disolve into the goo like matter. After that, it'll be good to go. ^_^b
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:49 pm

The larger amount of goo, the more chakra and less control. The user has intense physical strain if wielding too much.

I also designed that the goo can dissolve most things, but depending on how dense the material is. So diamond would be near impossible to disolve while something like loos dirt or gravel woudl be easy. It can't disolve gasses though. Soudn good?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:52 pm

Ah okay, that one sounds fine. ^_^ Could you put that in the post please?

XD Well most things can't dissolve gasses, you need to tone this down a little bit. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:58 pm

It can only dissolve solid materials, liquids and gasses are too complicated. Good?
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:59 pm

What about your acidic blood? You have a jutsu that mentions it but I don't see it mentioned anywhere else.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:01 pm

the acid is activated in the jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:15 pm

Um solids are a lot of things. >_>
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:23 pm

I put a limit on what kind of solids. Higher density things can't be absorbed period, or take longer times. Diamonds would take months to fulyl absorb a small amount of, but dirt and plants are easy. i'll add those into the bio now.
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PostSubject: Re: Kazuma Harukotsu   Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:47 pm

Okay thanks that's better. ^_^ Approved.
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