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PostSubject: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:02 am

Summon: Tigers and Lions
Signed: Yakedo Yuijij
Contractor: Yakedo Yuijij
History: Before the terrible murder occurred Yakedo thought it would be funny to take the scroll as a joke from his father's room. He had tucked it into his robe and forgot he had it until he woke up the next day in the hospital. He now carries it wherever he goes.

Summon creature: Killing pack
Rank: B
Description: A group of 5 tigers and 2 lions are summoned they are the size of their normal selves. They do Yakedo's bidding and kill whatever needs to be killed.
Abilities: Not many other than regular tigers and lions however they are very fast and can see great distances.

Summon creature: Shiro
Rank: A
Description: Summons a female white tiger called Shiro. Shiro is the head tiger. She usually allows her older brother Raion do most of the fighting.
Abilities: Shiro is fast, strong, and intelligent also when needed she can unleash a hot flame from her maw.

Summon creature: Raion
Rank: S
Description: Raion is a massive lion able to carry Yakedo easily on his back. Raion is the king of lions and proud to be it. He didn't get the brains, which went to his sister, but he did get the muscle.
Abilities: Raion is at least 3 feet taller and larger in every way than a normal tiger. He is powerful and fast. Also he can send jets of blue fire from his mouth that are hot enough to melt steel.

Summon creature: Shishi
Rank: D
Description: Shishi is harmless and can't really fight however she is used to keep Yakido company and give him someone to talk to. She is a young lion cub who hardly even has her teeth yet. She acts childish but is very sweet and cute.
Abilities: No real abilities just your average, talking, lion cub.Summon: Type of summon


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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:12 pm

You need this:

Summon: Type of summon
Signed: who has signed the scroll
Contractor: who possess the scroll
History: explain how your character got it, or just the past events of that clan of summons.

After you add that, I think the summons are fine. I'm iffy about the melting steel, though, but we don't have a lot of fire, so I can't really compare.

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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:00 pm

Ok i added the stuff thanks for the advice.
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:09 pm

The thing I gave you should be for the whole summon, not just an individual summon out of all of them. Sorry for the confusion. And put it on the top, it's supposed to describe the general summon.

Look at some other people's summons to see what I am talking about.

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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:22 pm

Oh haha ok my bad
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:29 pm

Ok i changed it i think that's right.
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:41 pm

I approve.

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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:56 pm

Lol, now it looks right. Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:58 pm

Ha ha great thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:33 am

Blue flames are hot enough to melt anything too, so having the one tiger weaker than the other one may make a little to no sense if you're comparing it power wise. After all blue fire is hotter, far hotter than normal red fire.

>.> that was my comment, 'side's that looks good. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:56 pm

Ok thanks ya i thought about that... maybe I'll just switch them
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:38 pm

Mm would seem like a good idea. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:40 pm

I changed it thanks for the advice Ritz Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:51 pm

That looks good. ^_^ And no problem lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:42 pm

Is there any chance I could have my own tiger summons? Just tigers, not a combo with lions like you have. None of them would be like the ones you have.
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:49 pm

Ya i guess. Mind if i see them before they get approved though?
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:47 pm

Sure
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PostSubject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon   Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:01 pm

Then ya definetley
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