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PostSubject: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:44 pm

Name: Akiza Raijin

Age: 18

Rank: Rokudaime Raikage

Village: Hidden Cloud

Affinity: Lightning, Water

Type: Uses ninjutsu to support her taijutsu

Specialized: Assassination, Swordsmanship, Tracking

Clan: Raijin Clan


Physical description: Akiza has flared, shoulder length dark silver hair, with part of it forming a long knee length ponytail with a red braided sheath, like this. Her eyes are a fierce golden yellow and she has dark brown skin. She is regarded as a beauty, and sees makeup as unnecessary. Her 5'5 foot frame is lithe and athletic, with a bit of muscle showing in her arms, legs, and stomach. Her bust is above average but seems larger on her small form. On her left shoulder are three black tiger stripe tattoos.

She wears a black minishorts made of fishnet and a black half-side skirt. She also wears toeless knee length boots on her feet and red braided cloth arm guards on her arms. At her waist is a belt that supports her twin sheaths as well as her scroll pouch. Around her chest is a white Hidden Cloud flak jacket styled as a tube top. She wears her white Hidden Cloud headband with around her neck like a choker. When not fighting, she usually wears her Raikage clothing over everything: an ornate kimono with the diamond shaped Kage hat with the kanji for "Lightning" on it.


Personality: Witty and intelligent, Akiza approaches most situations with a regal smile and a level head. She generally acts mature beyond her years (except when teasing), evident in how she talks without contractions despite her otherwise lack of formality as well as her love of tea. Though her age shows in her love of candy and other sweets. Her witty and playful exterior belies her more calculating nature hidden under the surface. Despite being a diligent and hard worker, her worst habit is her tendency to rope people into treating her to food through a combination of intimidation and fast talking. Akiza is also renown for her tempest-like temper, which takes a multitude to trigger but is terrifying when it is. On the other hand, Akiza has a rather callous lack of regard for life, believing in her village's 'Survival of the Fittest' doctrine and valuing military might.

Likes: Thunderstorms, candy and other kinds of sweets, tea ceremonies, sparring, challenging missions, tigers and other cats, cute things, the memory of her mother, her village and all who live within it

Hates: Most of the non-combat duties being Raikage entails, memories of the war, her brother's pranks, really sunny days, vegetables


Background: Akiza was born in the Hidden Cloud Village in an autumn thunderstorm, during her grandfather's reign as the Godaime Raikage. She was a prodigy, passing the chunin exam at 8, ascending to jounin at the age of ten, and then an ANBU squad leader at age 13. She looked up to her grandfather as the perfect example of what a ninja should be, and tried to model herself after him. She mastered the art of the sword, as well as supporting jutsus to complete it, and a number of elemental jutsus. Even at her young age he was regarded as one of the best shinobi produced by the Hidden Cloud Village.

Then when she was fourteen her grandfather stepped down as Kage, after the longest term any Raikage before him served. According to tradition, a ritualistic civil war named the Trial of Succession was waged to choose the new Raikage. For three long years this bloody ninja war waged, with over half of the village's total population perishing in the conflict, neighbor against neighbor and comrade against comrade. Akiza fiercely fought under her father and his allies, but watched as one by one they fell, her father's death particularly effecting her.

With her skill and mind greatly tempered by this long struggle, she eventually come out on top as the Rokudaime Raikage, ending the war with a great show of power made made her strength clear to all. One year after the conflict the village has been rebuilt and some semblance of normality has returned to Hidden Cloud. But even now her memories of the Trial haunt her every idle moment, so she busies herself with work whenever she can. As Raikage, she now seeks to return her village to it's previous strength under her grandfather as well as prove her village's power to the world, even if begets means more conflict.


Abilities:
Chakra Pool- Akiza possesses an extremely large chakra pool, on par with that of a bijuu host's. She uses it to execute a multitude of taxing jutsus that others would find exhausting to use, like her Raiton Armor and Shadow Clones.

Kenjutsu- Akiza is a skilled practitioner of the sword, particularly in conjunction with channeled lightning chakra. Her most powerful sword technique is when she wields all 8 or her swords in an extremely unorthodox manner, holding them with her teeth, elbows, armpits, waist and knees, then using her high speed to attack like a buzzsaw of blades. While this is deadly, especially when combined with her Raiton Armor, she feels that it looks ridiculous tries to avoid using it is possible.

Sense of smell- She has a power sense of smell that she can use to track and locate persons of interest. It is strong enough that even genjutsu cannot mask one's scent. However just like animals she can be tricked by decoy scents as well as lose the scent due it be being stale or washed away. This makes her an excellent tracker.


Weapons:
Name: Super Vibrato Knives
Type: Short Swords
Classification: Bladed weapons
Description: Moderately short, dagger-like swords with red handles. Akiza carries two in sheathes on her back, and six more in summoning scrolls on her thigh for a total of eight she has on her person at any one time. She uses these in lieu of kunai and shuriken.
Ability: They can channel Akiza's lightning chakra to drastically increase her cutting power by causing high speed vibration. By forcing an excess of chakra though them, she can generate an energy blade that increases her reach but decreases her piercing and cutting power. Akiza also uses them in a number of her jutsus an attacks.


Stats:
Nin: 5
Tai: 5
Gen: 2
Intelligence: 4
Speed: 5
Power: 4
Chakra amount: 5
Chakra control: 4
Seal speed: 5
Jutsu/Seal knowledge: 1

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:22 pm

Mm the character looks very well done. I just need stats. (: Then you'll be approved. :3

Annnd I approve. ^_^


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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:39 pm

Nice! ^_^ Me like!
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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:57 pm

Very nice. It looks nice. I wonder what the relationship between Rana and Akiza will be.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:59 pm

I very much look forward to seeing her inferiority complex thingy she has over her age in action once she meets the other kage, since the second youngest is still 9 years her senior>_>
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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:16 pm

I need to make my KA now.... To the drawing board! <_<
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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:07 pm

Added another weapon.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:25 pm

They're fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Fri Oct 02, 2009 1:15 am

Added Sage Mode to my profile, I hope I explained it well enough.

I eventually plan to have her get better at it, first to be able to fuse with an elder tiger like Jiraya's Hermit Mode and a while after that she's perfect it like Naruto.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:25 am

Chakra Pool - I don't think you can relate it to Tailed Beast because their chakra is limitless. Maybe you can just say she has a large amount of it and not compare it to the beast. And/or you can say once you are using Senjutsu, you have chakra comparable to Tailed Beast.

Senjutsu - Only problem I have is the amount of post. 10 is a lot when you can make it even more. Probably need a lower starting number, like 5, then be able to use clones to get 3 post more of energy.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Fri Oct 02, 2009 4:54 pm

When I said bijuu, I meant jinkinki(sp?) or whatever you call the host. Like Naruto. And iirc Senjutsu doesn't increase your chakra pool, just gives you another source of energy.

On the second point, granted. I suppose increments of 5 would be best, for a top duration of 15. There's no real reason for her clones to yield less natural energy. And you seem to have forgotten that that post limit is the max; using very powerful Sage Techs(like the Chidori Lance move I'm going to add) would knock her out of Sage mode just like Naruto's Rasenshurikin ended his.

For the individual Sage techs I make, I'll make sure to indicate if they take a significant among of Sage mode's limit; ie if using something counts as 2-3 posts instead of just one.

Does that sound fair?

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Oct 06, 2009 8:31 pm

15 is a lot of post, but we (Me, Dark, and Rio) decided that you can have that many for Senjutsu. It's a provisional approval, we just hope that you don't stay in it the full 15 post like you said you wouldn't. Have fun with your cat jutsu. cat

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:51 pm

Changed her weapon.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:34 am

new weapons are fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 1:25 am

Changed Akiza's weapons.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:00 am

sure, approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Akiza Raijin (Raikage)   Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:31 am

Approved changes.
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