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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:02 am | |
| Summon: Tigers and Lions Signed: Yakedo Yuijij Contractor: Yakedo Yuijij History: Before the terrible murder occurred Yakedo thought it would be funny to take the scroll as a joke from his father's room. He had tucked it into his robe and forgot he had it until he woke up the next day in the hospital. He now carries it wherever he goes.
Summon creature: Killing pack Rank: B Description: A group of 5 tigers and 2 lions are summoned they are the size of their normal selves. They do Yakedo's bidding and kill whatever needs to be killed. Abilities: Not many other than regular tigers and lions however they are very fast and can see great distances.
Summon creature: Shiro Rank: A Description: Summons a female white tiger called Shiro. Shiro is the head tiger. She usually allows her older brother Raion do most of the fighting. Abilities: Shiro is fast, strong, and intelligent also when needed she can unleash a hot flame from her maw.
Summon creature: Raion Rank: S Description: Raion is a massive lion able to carry Yakedo easily on his back. Raion is the king of lions and proud to be it. He didn't get the brains, which went to his sister, but he did get the muscle. Abilities: Raion is at least 3 feet taller and larger in every way than a normal tiger. He is powerful and fast. Also he can send jets of blue fire from his mouth that are hot enough to melt steel.
Summon creature: Shishi Rank: D Description: Shishi is harmless and can't really fight however she is used to keep Yakido company and give him someone to talk to. She is a young lion cub who hardly even has her teeth yet. She acts childish but is very sweet and cute. Abilities: No real abilities just your average, talking, lion cub.Summon: Type of summon
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:12 pm | |
| You need this:
Summon: Type of summon Signed: who has signed the scroll Contractor: who possess the scroll History: explain how your character got it, or just the past events of that clan of summons.
After you add that, I think the summons are fine. I'm iffy about the melting steel, though, but we don't have a lot of fire, so I can't really compare. | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:00 pm | |
| Ok i added the stuff thanks for the advice. | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:09 pm | |
| The thing I gave you should be for the whole summon, not just an individual summon out of all of them. Sorry for the confusion. And put it on the top, it's supposed to describe the general summon.
Look at some other people's summons to see what I am talking about. | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:22 pm | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:29 pm | |
| Ok i changed it i think that's right. | |
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Rio Founder
Posts : 646 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 30 Location : Watching the clouds
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:41 pm | |
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NinjaTez Hokage
Posts : 731 Join date : 2008-08-29 Age : 32 Location : Leaf Village
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:56 pm | |
| Lol, now it looks right. Approved. | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:58 pm | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:33 am | |
| Blue flames are hot enough to melt anything too, so having the one tiger weaker than the other one may make a little to no sense if you're comparing it power wise. After all blue fire is hotter, far hotter than normal red fire.
>.> that was my comment, 'side's that looks good. ^^ | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:56 pm | |
| Ok thanks ya i thought about that... maybe I'll just switch them | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:38 pm | |
| Mm would seem like a good idea. ^_^ | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:40 pm | |
| I changed it thanks for the advice Ritz | |
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Ritz Admin
Posts : 462 Join date : 2009-07-21 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:51 pm | |
| That looks good. ^_^ And no problem lol. | |
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Akiza Raikage
Posts : 85 Join date : 2009-07-30 Age : 33 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:42 pm | |
| Is there any chance I could have my own tiger summons? Just tigers, not a combo with lions like you have. None of them would be like the ones you have. | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:49 pm | |
| Ya i guess. Mind if i see them before they get approved though? | |
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Akiza Raikage
Posts : 85 Join date : 2009-07-30 Age : 33 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:47 pm | |
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Ibara Genin
Posts : 191 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Lion/Tiger summon Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:01 pm | |
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