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PostSubject: Griffin Ikazuchi   Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:44 pm

Name: Griffin Ikazuchi

Age: 27

Rank: Head Anbu (Seven Swordsman)

Village: Mist

Affinity: Wind and lightning

Type: Nin, Tai

Specialized: Griffin is extremely well trained in swordsmanship

Clan: No clan

Physical description: Griffin stands at an average 5'10" and has a lithe, somewhat thin body though he is weak by no means. He has semi long white hair and deep blue eyes the color of the sky.
<----Clothes

Personality: As second in charge of the Seven Swordsman and Head Anbu Griffin likes to act tough and incharge, giving people orders and missions. Even though he acts bossy he is not considered a mean or inconsiderate as he would give his own life in a second to save either his fellow Anbu or Swordsmen.

Likes: Being in charge, fighting, practicing swordsmen ship

Hates: His Kage treating him like a little kid, not being in charge.

Background: Griffin was an orphan since he was a baby, his parents had not wanted him and left him outside to die. Then a man came along by the name of Mako Yamiha. He was the head of the fabled group called the Seven Swordsmen of then Mist. Mako took Griffin in as his apprentice, training and guiding him through life, teaching him the ways of the blade.

Griffin enrolled in the Hidden Mist's ninja academy and quickly passed through with ease. Griffin then went into the chuunin exams, using his experienced swordsmanship Griffin defeated his opponents without breaking a sweat. However, chuunin rank wasn't good enough for Griffin, he wanted more, he wanted to show people that he didn't need the guidance of his parents to become a great ninja. His sword and sensei were all the family he needed.

After becoming a jounin Griffin, soon after joined the elite Anbu. He showed little mercy to his enemies, cutting them down without blinking an eye. However he was always watching his comrades, protecting them and helping them even if it meant endangering the mission. Mako then asked him to join the Seven Swordsmen, Griffin didn't even give it a second thought and was part of the elite group the next day. Griffin now resides in the hidden Mist Village as the Head Anbu and second in command of the Seven Swordsmen.

Weapon
Name: Tatsu
Type: Short Sword
Classification: Sai
Description:
There blades are about 1 inch long and the little end blades are 1/4 inches long. They are made of a high powered titanium alloy and Tatsu has a white handle while Ikazuchi has a yellow one.
Ability: Tatsu is the wind Sai of the pair and by infusing wind chakra into it, a wind blade will form, adding an extra half inch to it's length and making it even more deadly. (See Danzou's wind sword thing).

Name: Raikou
Type: Short Sword
Classification: Sai
Description: See Tatsu
Ability: Raikou is the lightning based sai in this duo and like Tatsu can grow longer and more powerful by infusing lightning chakra into it. (See Sasuke's chidori sword, of course it's not as good as that but it looks like that and is generally that idea).

Bijuu Forms

Rokubi- The Rokubi takes the form of a massive gryphon. The head is that of an eagle with white, fluffy feathers protruding and a long orange-yellow beak. It's front legs are those of bird legs with thick talons as hard as steel and razor sharp. The Rokubi's body is a lion, with a light brown mixed with gold color. The hind legs are lion legs wich have thick claws with the same properties as the talons. The Rokubi enjoys messing with Griffin though it doesn't mind if he uses it's chakra he enjoys taking it away, at the worst of times, just to toy with the human. It finds Griffin inferior to itself and does not care for the boy's life, though it has been known to lend some help to keep him alive even though it uses the excuse that it only keeps Griffin around for entertainment.

Demon Aura- Chakra flows from Griffin's seal on his back and encases his body. The chakra is a light gold color which surrounds him, sticking close to his clothes. Griffin's finger nails turn to large talons with the property's of steal. His eyes grow wide and his hair begins to form into feathers. This aura greatly increases Griffin's speed and strength as well as doubling his already impressive chakra pool. He also gains a special power of healing which will heal any scratches, breaks or bruises. However, it will not grown back limbs. Griffin has almost complete control over this form.

One Tail- The gold chakra forms a lion's tail, though the tail does not do much on it's own the fact that it's there mean's Griffin has become even more deadly. In this state Griffin's jutsus become even more powerful infusing themselves with the golden chakra. His speed and strength triple and the chakra form small wings on his back. These wings are imperfect and because of this can only allow Griffin to glide for a short time. Not only does he have wings but the white feathers in his hair from his previous form now cover his entire face and hair showing only his eyes, nose and mouth. Griffin has rather good control over this form but the Rokubi can still push him out of it at free will though it takes some effort on its part.

Three Tails- In this state the chakra spreads, forming 3 lion tails. However unlike the previous state instead of a chakra aura, the chakra has infused itself with Griffin's very being. The only thing that isn't infused is his head which now resembles an eagle, beak and all. The imperfect wings are now huge and can support Griffin's weight with ease allowing him to fly great distances. Griffin still has his talons, but now also grows claws on his feet. His eyes become completely black looking like pits to hell. Griffin usually has to fight to keep control in this form, though he is still usually driven by his own instincts. The Rokubi enjoys this form the most because it makes Griffin suffer the most, his mind is torn apart, half wanting to succumb to the Rokubi, half wanting to keep control.

Four Tails- This form is not much different other than the fact that Griffin gains a new, extremely dangerous but powerful ability which is what many people call his bijuu beam. This blast of energy is mainly chakra infused with wind, this attack can level a city block (about 4-5 buildings) in one blast. The chakra acts as an explosive, decintegrating everything in its path while the powerful winds shred everything else. Griffin can use this attack 2-3 times before reverting back to his 3 tail form.

Five Tails- In this form, lion bones sprout all over Griffin's body, and act as a sort of armor oner him. His head is encased in what looks like a lion skull roaring even though his head looks like an eagle. This is Griffin's most powerful, conscience stage, his speed flirts with the speed of sound and he hits like a freight train. Griffin is on the border of insanity and can barely control his powers in this form, he can still tell the difference between friend and foe but other than that he is a true monster.

Stats: 55
Nin: 7
Tai:8
Gen: 1
Intelligence: 4
Speed: 8
Power: 7
Chakra amount: 8
Chakra control: 6
Seal speed: 5
Jutsu/Seal knowledge: 1

(Btw I will be adding in a story about how he got his bijuu, changing stats, adding to him overall but these changes wont take affect until after the current arc, I wont change stats until I get the Bijuu though)


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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:19 pm

The stats equal up, but I'd like more detail on the guy if you be so kind as to do so. Also you should have more description for your main sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:18 am

Ok I added a background and some stuff. But what do you mean for description for the sword? Do you want more physical description or abilities?
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Mon Oct 26, 2009 4:51 am

Well you're going to be a part of the swordsmen, so having a descriptive sword instead of a sentence would be nice, yes?
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Mon Oct 26, 2009 12:33 pm

True...but my sword is more like a conductor type thing. Like it transfers the lightning from my gloves to its blade and then shoots it out. There's not too much more I can put but I'll work on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:52 pm

the beast chakra itself should only grant healing, a large chakra pool, minor changes in speed and strength, and superficial changes, like hands becoming claw-like. his eyes shouldn't be upgraded at that form. you can have them change in look, but not enhance them.

your other forms look good.

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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Wed Oct 28, 2009 12:30 pm

Ok I changed the beast chakra and updated my sword a little.
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:56 pm

Approved on my end. Now you need another.

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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:12 pm

well, going back over it, i dont think his weapons suit him as the second in command of teh swordsmen. gloves as his primary weapon? i don't really think so. just add the lightning bolts to the swords own ability, and scratch the thunder gloves. you can keep them, but they can't have the primary ability.

after that, it'll be approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:56 pm

Ok updated the sword and got rid of the gloves better?
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:05 pm

good to go

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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:05 pm

Ok made my sword different. I like these better personally.
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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:45 pm

for your weapons, the second ability for each is a no. there's no way twirling a simple weapon will be able to stop B and lower techs. No way at all. So take that out.

And the magnetism thing, no. That sort of thing would fall under a jutsu, not a weapon.

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PostSubject: Re: Griffin Ikazuchi   Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:26 am

For the shield thing just so you know I meant you would put chakra into which would create a sort of wind shield. I'll take those out though, gotta think of something else because what I have without those things are boring.
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