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PostSubject: Megumi's Jutsu.   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:36 pm

Name: Rakurai.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Lightning.
Rank: B.
Description: Using his lightning affinity, Megumi generates Static after clapping his hands and pulling them apart between the palms. While that is being preformed, a small but ever so growing bolt of lightning forms. While it grows he can control the circumference of the bolt which is in the form of a orb, he can handle the bolt by expanding it to larger standards and generate large amounts of lightning in the style of the rasengan as he attacks.

Name: Rakurai Burst.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Lightning.
Rank: A.
Description: Using his lightning affinity, Megumi generates Static after clapping his hands and pulling them apart between the palms. While is if preformed, a bolt of lightning in the form of a ball. He then could make it smaller then burst into many smaller, invisable to the naked eye lightning strikes that stings the opponent once it reaches their skin. The non visable lightning strikes move as fast as enhanced natural lightning strikes, once penetrated the skin, it paralyzes the chakra flow into stunning it.

Name: False Hearing.
Type: Genjutsu.
Element: None.
Rank: B.
Description: When done preforming handseals, Megumi creates false soundings to fool his opponent or opponents, he can create these sound illusions from pure thought. He can have his opponent think an ally is screaming for help.

Name: False Sighting.
Type: Genjutsu.
Element: None.
Rank: B.
Description: After preforming handseals,Megumi can create false objects and people through illusions. He can create illusions through pure thought,having his opponents believe they saw an attack when it didnt happen. This can go on for a short amount of time and could be useful during a last resorts.

Name: False Speed.
Type: Genjutsu.
Element: None.
Rank: B.
Description: Megumi would preform handseals to a fast amount and he can make an illusion that he is moving fast or slow or can have the opponent think that he is moving fast or slow.

Name: Inner Strike.
Type: Taijutsu.
Element: None.
Rank: A.
Description: Megumi preforms handseals quite quickly, he gains the ability to see the internal body of his opponent, The Tissue and the muscles,the blood flow,Everything except the chakra flow. After that is done,every strike from Megumi while in this form will damage the inner organs and such to the opponent. Hitting muscule will loosen tissue making the attacks harder when lander on them.

Name: Fade From Existance.
Type: Genjuts.
Element: None.
Rank: A.
Description: By Preforming handseals swiftly, all senses of the user's existance fades away but in reality he is still there. Opponents cannot hear him, smell him, taste him, see him or feel him. The chakra supply is gone and everything that is related to the user has faded in the eyes and mind of the opponent however in reality he is still there, having his opponent believe he has died. To fool the opponent, a complete copy of the user's everything from the place he preformed the jutsu will be there as a decoy. This Decoy will have everything the original had but instead the decoy will be dead until the jutsu is canceled or broken by the user. This leaves an escape for the user and allies or for allies or the user to attack. He can preform this jutsu on his allies to help them aswell or preform it on his opponent to believe they died when an attack hits them.

Name: Radiated Light.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Element: Lightning.
Rank: C.
Description: By using chakra control and fusing his Lightning affinity with his chakra, he forms a bright energy made from radiated lightning and chakra inside his body and releases that 'lightning chakra' or radiated energy by shooting it out of his palm, mouth or eyes. As the light enter the world he can use chakra control to muniplate the size and how bright the light is, using it for distractions or blinding opponents.


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PostSubject: Re: Megumi's Jutsu.   Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:43 am

First off, your jutsus in the spoiler box are all too broken, they won't be approved.

As for your others:

Rakurai Burst. Make the attacks visible. You can't send invisible balls of lightning and use it to cancel chakra flow. At the most this will be a provisional approval.

Inner strike sounds like it would take a kekkei genkai to see internal organs. So that's not approved either.

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PostSubject: Re: Megumi's Jutsu.   Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:32 pm

Too Broken? What do you mean? should I take them out of the Spoiler? o.o

I can make them visable.

Can I leave out the part where he sees the internal organs part? that way it won't seem like a Kekkei Genkai type move? or would it be best to just take it out?
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PostSubject: Re: Megumi's Jutsu.   Wed Feb 17, 2010 7:30 pm

By broken I mean too powerful. It had nothing to do with the spoiler. They won't be approved.

And I think it's best just to take that part out.

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